Animattions's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Marcus Fenix in battle]

Nice

You have a very nice art style and the animation isn't too shabby, the main problem is that it looks kinda rushed...as there's like a few frames with colour then it's like all see-through there on after...as you've already stated...but i recommend either getting rid of those few frames with colour or colour it all in...it will help it out alot.

Elsewise this wasn't too bad....i look forward to seeing what you come up with next

Take care

~Matt

Jereminion responds:

o yea i rushed it you can see from all the jagged edges...just wanted to finish and submit it 8-)

[Girlchan in Paradise Ep1]

Was Alright

I really respect your work Ego, it always has some subtle charm to it that makes me laugh. The problem i found with this was it seemed like you was trying to make us laugh rather than making jokes where you wanted it, if you get me.

I admire you for trying something different from the "Awesome Series" but it seems like you need to rethink your strategy for your off the side animations because this lacked your usual charisma.

I hope when your next animation pops up it will have that Ego feel to it again, keep up the good work, i await to see your next animation.

Take care!

~Matt

Egoraptor responds:

That's weird, I had the exact opposite attitude towards this animation. That is, the jokes in this animation were made because we thought they were funny, I was completely paranoid about whether or not other people would, too.

[The Lady In White]

Elegant

This was visually amazing, it flowed so elegant and beautifully! I have to say i'm now a fan of your style...it mellowed me out and made feel relaxed.

You really have something there...keep these coming!

Take care

~Matt

Hildebrandt responds:

Thanks, I'll just take a look at your animation as well...:)

[Luis]

Wasn't Bad Annoying Voices

You definitely have something there, the way you used pictures to represent the words that were being sad is a good way of getting across a quick laugh since there are millions of funny pictures out there...but the problem was mainly down to your voices...they were very annoying because of the tone and the volume of them because they sorta crackled my speakers even on low volume.

With the voices try and add more of an attitude and personality to them, then it will be so much better :). Also you're not bad at animating either, as i saw a small fragment of proper animation in their and it wasn't too shabby.

Take care!

~Matt

tankbuster781 responds:

Thx